Year 2 β€” Writing

Editing and proofreading

Read back your own writing to find and fix mistakes, and make your sentences better.

πŸ’‘Understand

EDITING means reading your writing again and making it BETTER β€” maybe adding more detail or a more interesting word. PROOFREADING means checking for MISTAKES β€” like missing capital letters, full stops, or spelling errors.

β€œDraft: 'the dog was big it ran fast' β†’ Fixed: 'The big dog ran fast.'”

Proofreading fixed the missing capital letter and full stop. Editing also combined the two short, choppy sentences into one smoother sentence.

πŸ”Spot it

What mistake needs to be fixed in each sentence?

Question 1

the sun is bright

πŸ’‘ This sentence needs a capital 'T' at the start and a full stop at the end.

Question 2

I have too dogs.

πŸ’‘ 'Two' is the number; 'too' means 'also' β€” this is a common spelling mix-up.

Question 3

she runned to school

πŸ’‘ 'Ran' is the correct past tense of 'run' β€” 'runned' isn't a real word.

🧠Think about it

Why is it useful to read your writing OUT LOUD when you're checking it?

✍️Try it

Find and fix the mistake.

we went too the park

Question 1

What is wrong with this sentence?

πŸ’‘ Check the first letter, and think about 'to' vs 'too'.

πŸ“Practise

Find the mistake in each sentence.

Question 1

my cat likes fish

Question 2

He goed to the shop.

Question 3

The bird flyed away.

Question 4

In one word, what do we call checking our writing for mistakes like spelling and punctuation?

πŸ’‘ It's one of the two skills named in this lesson's title.

Question 5

i like my school

Question 6

We seen a rainbow.

🎯Apply

Read the passage, then answer the questions below.

yesterday me and my freind went too the beach we buildt a sandcastle

Question 1

What is wrong with 'freind'?

πŸ’‘ The letters 'i' and 'e' are swapped.

Question 2

What is wrong with 'buildt'?

Question 3

What word should replace 'too' in 'went too the beach'?

πŸ’‘ 'Too' means 'also'; the correct word here means 'in the direction of'.

πŸ†Challenge

Read this sentence out loud in your head: 'she like ice cream'. Can you spot and fix the mistake?

πŸ”„Review

A quick mastery check β€” 3 questions.

Question 1

the ball is red

Question 2

Why is reading your writing out loud helpful when checking it?

Question 3

She eated her lunch.